Evaluation After Exhibition

From seeing my short film up in the exhibition I was happy with myself and the feedback I got from visitors. In all honesty I think the film would have been better as a projection on to a blank wall, played on a loop. As the footage is quite short I would say it is more of a performance piece rather than a short film, however projected onto a wall I think this would make it more of an instillation piece and the message would have been a lot more hard hitting. I think the message I wanted to create was communicated quite well, however, there are a few things I think could have been improved. If I was to produce a piece similar again, then next time I would definetely make it longer and also get the actors to move around a little more. I think the space could have been used better and I would have used close up footage aswell as distant footage to break down the depth of field. One of my initial ideas was to use more than 2 actors, however I think the idea was portrayed how I wanted it to be with just the two.